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[bbn]

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Below is the song-
http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=1190936&T=7737

[DjK31]

I like the progressive melody of this song.
The only problem is that its clipping too much with the kicks/drums etc, and it's not EQed well...:/
Try adjusting the volume of the kick, and reduce a bit of mid-high frequency.
Other than that nice job

[Deep Embrace]

At first I didn't notice the clipping, but now... Aha. Too much reverb on the percussion I think.

Generally, I would advise against using FL preset drum sounds, especially the hats. Try these:

http://www.vipzone-samples.com/freesamples.php

But yes, otherwise nice progression, nice synth sounds. Piano work is neat too.

I would also agree that it's too long. I'd cut it by maybe three minutes.

And to end on a positive note, I always love your melodies and moods in your music. Keep at it!

[Kazango]

I like how it sounds very much like an epic, ever-changing throughout the course of the track. Very creative!

Nice work.

[Inny Binny]

Yeah, there's clearly the clipping, but aside from that, I really like that you've taken a slight departure from the fast pianos, trying something new (not that those songs are bad - they're good - but it's good to see you trying different avenues). It's still got a fast paced feeling, but the rhythms are more carefully crafted on your melodies now.

Evolution is pretty cool. You're definitely more of a composer than a producer, which is all I really care about anyway, but it is best to practice getting nice deep sounds and limiting your sound to below 0 dB.

[bbn]

yep. long time no see, inny.
At first , thanks to all those comment esp. deep's one.
the samples you provided did help me a lot.
Next time you will hear them -

So i need get back one my work. Music CD are going to be released but i am still on my computer games.